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2018托福写作练习:老年人探索新事务

2018-03-13 14:17:45来源:托福考试网分享
导读:托福写作在整个考试中是最容易拉分的,因为考察的是全面能力,这就需要更用心的学习和练习。下面小编为大家分享一些高分范文,希望同学们能从中找到写作技巧,最终能把成绩提上来。

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新托福写作题目回忆版本一:

A/D: It is better for elders to take risks and explore new things than young people.

新托福写作题目回忆版本二:

It is better for elders to take risks and explore new things than young people.

老年人比年轻人更适合冒险或者探索新的事物?

参考范文之一:

Older people have more limitations than younger people, with their body, their mind, and in terms of the responsibilities they have. Taking risks wouldn’t matter so much without these limitations, but because they have these limitations, it’s worse for older people to take risks and explore new things than it is for younger people.

The most obvious limitation older people have is from the effects age has on their body. Certain activities that require good physical condition, and that can be dangerous if one is not fit enough, such as hiking or diving, should be avoided in this case. This may also prevent older people from switching to a new but physically demanding career, such as working as a personal trainer. Younger people, on the other hand, are likely to have certain advantages, such as having more energy, or being able to recover more quickly from injuries.

Age has other negative effects on the human body, reducing mental ability as well as physical.

Slow mental reaction times could be disastrous, such as if an older person were to experiment with trading on the stock market, with one slow sale potentially resulting in a lot of money lost. Poor memory could mean that older people overlook a certain item of safety equipment, such as forgetting to tighten a strap or secure a helmet. In contrast, younger people don’t suffer in these ways, and so can, for example, enroll on a difficult college course without experiencing too much stress.

Older people are also likely to hold many social responsibilities. This includes family. At this point in their lives, older people are likely to have at least one generation below them. If they fail, it could have negative effects on these family members. Older people could get injured and need care, inconveniencing their adult children, or enroll on a course only to find that it is too time-consuming, and so have less quality time to spend with their grandchildren. Younger people, however, have very few of these responsibilities, if any, and so are much freer to make big and disruptive life choices, such as moving across the world to work in a completely different country and culture.

With all of these limitations, of the mind, and body, and extensive social expectations, older people should consider very carefully if they want to engage in risky activities or endeavors, or, better still, not take such risks at all, for the good of themselves and others.

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